Thursday 14 March 2013

DRAFT_final assignment


TANK-TOP CITY
by
(Kan Hui Cheng)
(2D)


(Eva a evil person who want to influence people to be evil. Soon Alex and Sam the good citizens find out, going stop his way! )


FINAL ASSIGNMENT (Grade       % )

My Blog: (iloveriders.blogspot.sg)
My Email: (kanhc91@gmail.com)
Deadline: xx Jan 2013







EXECUTIVE SUMMARY:

TITLE:                                   (Tank-Top City)
GENRE:                                 (comedy)
TARGET AUDIENCE:          (teenage age 13 and onwards)

THE DOMINANT CULTURAL / SOCIAL ISSUE FEATURED IN MY WORK IS:        
(dominant issue)

LOGLINE:
(Eva a evil person who just move into Tank-Top City want to influence people to be evil as people there are too helpful and friendly. Soon Alex and Sam the good citizens find out, going stop his way!)

SYNOPSIS:
(Eva disguise himself into a pre-school teacher and each them how to be rude to them parents and elderly. When the children were feat by their parents/ grandparents, the kids acts rudely to them. Alex and Sam saw, went to find who did it, and stop Eva.)




CHARACTER PROFILES

CHARACTER LIST (All characters)
Key Character - Alex
Supporting Character(s) - Sam
Villain (if any) - Eva

CHARACTER BIO OF KEY CHARACTER
Alex was a bimbo guy, pretty handsome, but with a kind and helpful heart with good manner that the whole Tank-Top City people love him. He not a human, he's alien from a planet called Mars. He will be very nasty when somebody being rude or not very nice, he will do the same thing twice as much to that person, until they beg for mercy.


3 Act Structure

Act1 setup:

Key Character(s): Alex and Sam

Must - have info: Alex and Sam are good citizen and neighbour in TanK-Top city.  They are trying to find Eva and kick him out of the town.

Motive: Alex and Sam are trying to stop Eva doing bad influence people in town.

Conflict/Obstacles: Eva disguise himself as a pre-school teacher, in the same time Alex and Sam are hunting him, and can't recognize him. They when further to find Eva.


Act2 Confrontation:

Confrontation: Eva was teaching the children to be rude and disrespect to people who is older/ elder than them. After school, the children were fence by their parents/grandparents/ siblings. They started being rude and disrespect.

Turning Point: When Alex and Sam pass by the school again, they find that the children are behaving weird to their elders. They went to check the school.

Conflict/Obstacles: Alex and sam trying to stop the children to be rude. but there too much children attacking them.

Up the Stakes:  They run to some where save in the school.



Act3 Resolution:

Climax (Grand Finale): When they are hiding from the children, they saw Eva both Alex and Sam charge and try to catch him. They beat Eva up and throw him into the sky and Eva fly far far away.

Resolution:  After beating up Eva, Alex sudden went so angry, he's went to school and scold all the children who were very rude to the elders. the children cried and say sorry to the elders.

Moral of the story if any: Don't be evil, soon you will be flying in the sky.

Thursday 7 March 2013

class exercise: cat fight

Title/ Topic: fighting for a guy
Key Character: Gigi and Zara
Supporting Character: Zedd, the handsome guy

Story: Gigi and Zara were rival, fighting for a handsome guy.  Took place  outside the school.

Scene1 -

EXT: OUTSIDE SCHOOL: Gigi was waiting for Zara outside the school, and saw Zara came out form the school.

GIGI (stare at Zara) and walk toward her: ZARA! YOU THIS BLOODY UGLY BITCH!

ZARA: *sigh* what's your f**king problem again?

GIGI: Zedd is mine! stopping being a bitch and go out with him!

ZARA: *shock & laugh* ARE YOU CRAZY!? he didin't say he have a girlfriend like you? he's still single! who u think you are? MY MOTHER!!??

GIGI (slap Zara): NO! but i will help your mother to teach you a lesson!

ZARA(stare her and charge toward to attack her): so you wanna a fight!! BRING IT ON!!!!!!

* Gigi and Zara having a big fight, at the same time, more and more passers by came to watch and  Zedd walk pass and try to stop them*

ZEDD (shouted) : STOP IT!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU BOTH DOING?? AREN'T YOU BEING SHAME DOING THIS IN THE PUBLIC??

ZARA (POITED HER): she's the one who started it first! and say you are belonging to her!

ZEDD (STUT for awhile)

GIGI: Zedd, I like you!

ZARA: wait! I LIKE YOU TOO! who are you going to chose between us?

ZEDD: *sigh* look girl, I'M A GAY! i'm going to engage to AN OTHER GUY NEXT TWO WEEK.. you girls got the wrong ideas from me..

Both Gigi and Zara were very shock!

story by: Kan Hui Cheng



Hero - ALEX, BIMBO
Heroine - SAM, EMO (SAD)
Villain - UNO / EVA
Comic Relief - (male/female - optional)
SHAMPOO

 Characterization:
(YOU TELL ME WHO THEY ARE, WHAT THEY ARE LIKE, LET ME GET TO KNOW THEM - USING YOUR SCRIPT)
- Special Voice, behaviours, actions
- X-Factor
- Item (eg Mr Bean's green mini, teddy bear)
- Cliches / Stereotypes
- Antagonist /  Protagonist / Supporting

story-telling techniques:
(MUST USE AT LEAST 1 TYPE, YOU CAN MIX AS WELL)
1. journey / quest or goal-achievement / education
2. rivalry / testing
3. discovery / coming of age
4. love / forbidden love
5. problem-solution / question-answer

building story design:
(MUST USE ONE OR MORE OF ITEMS BELOW)
premise - use a statement
concept - how do you want to tell your story? ref to: ministry of silly walks, spam, sample tvcs, etc.
theme - themes & issues relating to target audience
meanings - making sense > what is your key message